टेम्पलेट:Obituary: रिवीजन सभ के बीचा में अंतर

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imported>Calliopejen1
rewrite to remove wordiness
imported>Danielfolsom
reduce wording more - I'd like some kind of connection between the "reads like" and "violates" parts
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|This {{{1|article}}} reads like an [[obituary]] and(therefore is unsuitable because it violatesviolating '''[[WP:MEMORIAL]]''' or '''[[WP:NPOV]]'''). <br /><small>Please consider [{{fullurl:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|action=edit}} reworking] this article to [[Wikipedia:NPOV tutorial|facilitate the removal of NPOV]] from Wikipedia.</small></small>
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